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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #30 on: March 25, 2009, 12:49:16 AM »
Ooh, thought you meant the right body line from our perspective (her back). Yeah, it was.

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #31 on: March 25, 2009, 01:08:31 AM »
  The sloping of her cheek seems a little too dramatic, as if she has something stuffed between her teeth there.
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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #32 on: March 25, 2009, 03:06:25 AM »
depends on the angle and what the shading will be like...
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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #33 on: March 25, 2009, 11:07:45 PM »
Here's another WIP, still rather messy:





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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #34 on: March 25, 2009, 11:26:55 PM »
it's very good, though I feel like there is some shading missing around the face...
A letter, a word
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A sentence, a paragraph
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A page, a story
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A book, a novel.
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They all mean so little when you can't take time to put your soul into the work.

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #35 on: March 26, 2009, 01:00:44 AM »
  The fact her eyes are vacant really creeps me out.
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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #36 on: March 26, 2009, 01:31:43 AM »
now that you mention it.... O.o
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A page, a story
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A book, a novel.
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They all mean so little when you can't take time to put your soul into the work.

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #37 on: March 26, 2009, 10:15:27 AM »
Hey, this looks pretty good.
The shading of the clothes is in my opinion nearly perfect, there isnít much to do anymore.
The skin/face needs some shading, but I guess that will be the next step.
Iím looking forward to see her eyes.  :reivsmile:

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #38 on: March 26, 2009, 10:24:34 AM »
...She be pretty.  :reivsmile:
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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #39 on: March 26, 2009, 12:31:45 PM »
@KRoP & Hunter:
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@Squall:
There's probably still some shading that needs to be fixed with the clothings; especially the upper part. And the part above the chest looks a bit too plain, but I'm not really sure what to do there. But yep, the face'll be worked on.

@Abi:
By the way, the hair colour is kinda similar to your if I remember right; have you found out what the right word for it is?
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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #40 on: March 26, 2009, 02:26:32 PM »
The eyes creep me out even more now...
If I could, I'd turn back time, forget it all and leave this mess behind.
If I could, her love would always be around.

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #41 on: March 26, 2009, 02:33:04 PM »
Aw c'mon, don't make me edit the eyes of that girl from The Ring to it. :P

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #42 on: March 26, 2009, 06:10:32 PM »
No, her hair is for sure brown. It's harder to make a drawing with ambiguous coloring.

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Someone announced they had a blone joke, and was like "Wait! Are there any blondes here?" Immediately he looked at me and was like, "Oh, Abbi! Well..." So I just told him I wouldn't be offended, and that solved the dilemma. So yeah, no one knows. I hear light brown every bit as often as I hear dirty blonde. 
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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #43 on: March 26, 2009, 06:20:16 PM »
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ha..ha...ha...  If you want I could do a Macromedia flash trace of it and then i can really screw with your lovely pic...
A letter, a word
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A sentence, a paragraph
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A page, a story
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A book, a novel.
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They all mean so little when you can't take time to put your soul into the work.

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Re: Ralle and Lyra workshop
« Reply #44 on: April 04, 2009, 02:56:16 AM »
:~

Here's a WIP of Ralle: