Nice one, Reives. I like this style and the instruments you used.
But I don’t think that something like this would fit into the Quintessence atmosphere. You have a lot of freedom in opening and ending/credit songs (The intro To Realize e.g. is very different from the usual Quintessence music), but in the normal game you should be careful. I know you won’t ruin the atmosphere with a completely improper song, but it’s hard to judge after you heard the song a lot of times and watched the scene. If you play it the first time (= if you are the player), you maybe won’t like it.