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Slumpymaster

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[XP] Slumpy's Shootout
« on: June 15, 2014, 05:22:41 PM »
This is my first time using RMXP. I'm looking for honest feedback, bugs, and overall opinion. When you reach the second part of the castle, there's a system event that'll prevent movement forward to another map. That's as far as I've gotten.

Slumpy's Shootout

Reality is based on the person who perceives it.

Synopsis:
T.J. is an ignorant factory worker that discovers the world is not what it was when he last saw it. In order for him to get back home, he'll need the help of a mysterious stranger to save the world in which T.J. is currently confined.

Characters:

T.J.
? ? ? (Name will be revealed in game)

Credit:
Slumpymaster


Demo:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B76Um5B25yOXLVpieWdSN1lMUEE/edit?usp=sharing

Roxaszu

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Re: [XP] Slumpy's Shootout
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2014, 02:30:04 AM »
I find some bugs :

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You forgot the wall over here.




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This Grandma waiting on the table



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And If you stay at that inn, it will be pitch dark like this, and I can't do anything bout it
T.J : Wait, But it's still dark outside !
Innkeeper : Well, You guys should out by now.
T.J : ....




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There are some like the first picture outside the first house, I think you should put a wall or put that down lower than the character or something


Overall, It's good :)
Is this your first time making game?
« Last Edit: June 16, 2014, 02:32:33 AM by Roxaszu »

Slumpymaster

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Re: [XP] Slumpy's Shootout
« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2014, 02:31:36 PM »
@Roxaszu

Thanks for playing and finding a few of those bugs for me! I'm glad that I know at least one person has enjoyed my work. This is my first time making a game with this engine (if you could call it that XD). I made a tower defense in java for a college project, but other than that, this is my first time working with something in ruby (even if it is just a majority of design work XD).

Anyways, thanks again! I'll make sure to post when I get the last half of it done.

Roxaszu

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Re: [XP] Slumpy's Shootout
« Reply #3 on: June 16, 2014, 10:18:11 PM »
Hahaha,
Sure,
No Prob.
It's nice for the first time though.
Anyway,
Have fun with making your games ;)

Slumpymaster

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Re: [XP] Slumpy's Shootout
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2014, 02:43:29 AM »
*UPDATE*
Hey all!

I just got to the end of the story and making all the events for it. I have a few more things I want to tweak before I set it out for beta. I hope you all have enjoyed the demo and would still like to hear opinions about how the game goes.

Thanks again for your support on my first game!

Slumpymaster

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Re: [XP] Slumpy's Shootout
« Reply #5 on: June 30, 2014, 12:37:50 AM »
*Update*

The finished product is ready. Hope you guys enjoy it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B76Um5B25yOXblZjU2pBOTc0XzA/edit?usp=sharing