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Project Nakabi
« on: October 11, 2008, 04:58:58 AM »
TOPIC UNDER CONSTRUCTION!!!
Life of Bwian is just a sideproject, but this is my main project.

Story

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It is year 2567, and it is 50 years, since the last major war ended. The world is in an economic depression, but the nations keep producing more weapons.
Some cities are in a state of havoc, and anarchy rules.
Several factions are fighting for control over the united states, and both europe and asia are in ruins.
Of the major cities around the world, only a few managed to come over the crisis; Tokyo, Amsterdam, Venice, Hong Kong, Los Angeles, and Sydney. Other cities, however, were not so lucky. New York is in ruins, and have been divided up into several sections; Benson, Straville, and the Military Districts.

Every day, the citizens of New York fights for their own survival, and lives on the street, or in ruined buildings. They salvage heaps of scrap, in order to find something of value, so they can eat.
In short, New York is in despair.

Meanwhile, a shadow organization, named D.E.A.T.H, is slowly gaining more control over USA. They conduct experiments on a special kind of people, that they call "Materia." Those are known to have special TA-MA piloting capabilities. Recently, the entire 14th IMAD was wiped out, during a major battle, and all of the Materia have been killed with it.

Currently, an arms transport, transporting weapons to the Resistance Movement, based in Benson-5, have been assaulted by bandits, in Benson-5 Valley. With it is the last known Materia alive.


Character Info

Name: "Dace"
Race: Caucasian
Gender: Male
Age: Mid 20's
Eye Colour: Blue
Callsign: Light-1
Unit: 14th IMAD
Status: A.W.O.L.
Designated Mobile Armor: Dark Angel
Known Family:
 Ray McAllen, Adoptive Father - Deceased
 Unknown Caucasian Male, Biological Father - Deceased
 Unknown Caucasian Female, Biological Mother - Deceased

Terms

TA-MA: Tactical Assault Mobile Armor. A revolutionary bipedal weapons system, designed to be operated in areas hazardous for humans, this is the workhorse of the army. Originally designed, to help people to work with hazardous stuff, like Nuclear Waste. You might happen to see their names like following; TA-MA (Some number here.) The explanation for this, is that the number tells us which generation machine, it is. Behind it, you may find an additional name, which is the model name.

TAG: Tactical Assault Gear. A weapon, that is still in developement, and is classified as a power armor. When run, it's got wide 11 meter long cables attached to it's back. If cut, the machine will immediatly stop. Not very efficient in actual combat, due to this critical weakness-
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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2008, 05:05:34 AM »
I'm looking forward to screenshots, and character info soon? :)
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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2008, 05:07:23 AM »
I like how you take the story into the real world, and not a fictional one at that. This might turn out good.

Yet, I have to say there's way too little information for me to give a special opinion about this. There's A LOT more I want to see before taking any conclusions. Screenshots, character info, features etc.

Need scripting help? Toss me a PM and I'll see what I can do.
Also able to help with anything RMXP related. Please do not hesitate to ask.

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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2008, 05:21:53 AM »
Sydney?

As if...

But otherwise, it sounds good, and as Sarkilas said, it is so much more interesting that it is in the real world with a real problem, not that fantasy isn't fun.

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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #4 on: October 11, 2008, 05:28:16 AM »
Poor New York. It's always the first to go to pot.

Anyway, looking forward to more info!
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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #5 on: October 11, 2008, 01:36:16 PM »
I know, that it needs a little work... I'm working on that part... More info will come up shortly, since this project is on my stationary.

EDITI'm actually working on the character information atm, and it will be finished ASAP!
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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2008, 10:21:42 AM »
What about it, Greeny?..
I've been waiting for a moth  8)
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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #7 on: November 11, 2008, 06:28:37 AM »
A moth? No! There are no moths in the game. Just people, and large battle robots... And explosions... And lasers! And destroyed cities!
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Re: Project Nakabi
« Reply #8 on: November 11, 2008, 06:40:00 AM »
Oh, too bad i really love moths
If everything could ever feel this real forever
If anything can ever be this good again
The only thing i'll ever ask of you, you gotta promise not to stop when i say when..