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A fanfic!
« on: October 03, 2008, 01:46:37 PM »
Sorry, it's not for Quintessence. :'( Maybe someday.

Eh, I think I wrote this summer 2003 when I was 13. I was such a ringer back then! So, I wrote a fanfic about Legolas having a *slight* crush on Arwen. lol.

If you know Lord of the Rings (probably more enjoyable if you read the book and saw the movie) you should give this a read.

I'm posting this as an attachment because it's twelve pages long.

« Last Edit: October 03, 2008, 02:10:34 PM by abigailian »
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2008, 03:17:12 PM »
I never really watched LotR much beyond sketching through, so I don't really understand the scenarios in depth too much. But hahah, Legolas x Arwen eh. :P

I haven't read the entire thing, but from what I did read it seems to be rather well done - very well done for a 13 year old rather; when I was 13 I was proudly bragging about how I could spell the word "multiplication" (14 letters!!!). It's also kinda refreshing to read a first-person perspective, which I haven't come across much recently. Something I found a little humorous though, was that there seems to be a little "girlish tone" in it (for obvious reasons. :P and no offense, don't take it the wrong way), combined with the fact that it's first-person with Legolas; not that he was a macho anyhow, but just thought I'd have something to say.
 

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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 03:53:41 AM »
Lol, yeah. I did some minor editing before I put it up, and reading through it, the nonmachoness was definitely a weakness. Though I did have a male friend who told me he found it rather realistic, so maybe it's just atypical for male perspective stories to be written that way, or my friend is atypical.

Thanks for taking the time to read it, as it is rather long. It kinda starts to unravel towards the end, after Legolas joins the fellowship, cause I couldn't figure out how to not go over sutff that everybody already knows, since it's in the movie.

EDIT: Oh, and unfortunately Legolas x Arwen stories were all the rage about that time, although most of the time, they ended up together, and mine was one that could theoretically have occurred (with only very slight disagreements) in either the book or the movie. (Well, mostly the movie.)
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #3 on: October 13, 2008, 08:56:15 PM »
I am 13 and i can't spell multiplication
i need to train a bit more...
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I Really liked the fanfic i printed it and started reading before sleeping  :vikonsmile:
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #4 on: October 14, 2008, 05:29:22 PM »
Whoa I thought you ment Arwen from the forums D: "Arwen Starlight" O_o I was gonna say huh?

Btw interesting story from what I've seen of it :3 I wish I could sit down and type that much 7.7
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #5 on: October 14, 2008, 05:30:33 PM »
Whoa I thought you ment Arwen from the forums D: "Arwen Starlight" O_o I was gonna say huh?

FAIL


IT'S ARWYM
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #6 on: October 14, 2008, 05:33:23 PM »
Wow, that was a fail. I'll bet anything that's a pet peeve ov Arwen's too.

So did you say 7.7 ot of ten?
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #7 on: October 14, 2008, 05:34:52 PM »
Wow, that was a fail. I'll bet anything that's a pet peeve ov Arwen's too.

So did you say 7.7 ot of ten?
You mean me, right? O:
I give it 8/10 because it made me sleepy~
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #8 on: October 14, 2008, 05:37:36 PM »
You read it before bed right? So
1. Being sleepy is almost unavoidable.
2. Making you sleepy isn't a good thing?
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #9 on: October 14, 2008, 05:38:01 PM »
Nu some people use 7.7 7_7 as a "rolling eyes" face.
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Re: A fanfic!
« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2008, 05:39:27 PM »
Nu some people use 7.7 7_7 as a "rolling eyes" face.
O:
Don't 7.7 me

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