Author Topic: The Mecenary: Revenge of the Hunter  (Read 1796 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Ruzu

  • *
  • Tier 7
  • **
  • Posts: 868
  • Gender: Male
  • I'm stalking youuuuzzz
  • Current Mood: cheerful cheerful
The Mecenary: Revenge of the Hunter
« on: October 04, 2010, 02:52:53 PM »
One of the short games I'm making while working on my TBS still.

The Mecenary: Revenge of the Hunter

Story:
"I promise I'll find you! No one will stop me, do you hear?!"
Its been two years but the memory is burned into my mind, just barely recovering from the dragon poison I set out to the north to find the dragon that took you away from me. No one will stop me, nothing will stop me I have the resources to find you...If you are still alive...

Characters Thus Far

Dante
Age: 30
Weapon: Hunter (A halberd like weapon. A lance with a long blade upon it)
Hair: Black
Skin: Tan
Race: Human - Mixed
Occupation: Mercenary

??
Age: ??
Weapon: ??
Hair: None
Skin: Blue Scales
Race: Dragon
Occupation: N/A

[Features]
ABS

More to come of this-- I like the story so I want to finish it.

Avarlie

  • Tier 6
  • *
  • Posts: 441
  • Current Mood: blank blank
Re: The Mecenary: Revenge of the Hunter
« Reply #1 on: October 28, 2010, 06:11:46 AM »
Oh cool your using ABS lots of people don't like using it. But I think it make rpg maker games more fun. Dante seems like one determined guy. Can I ask who is he looking for?

Ruzu

  • *
  • Tier 7
  • **
  • Posts: 868
  • Gender: Male
  • I'm stalking youuuuzzz
  • Current Mood: cheerful cheerful
Re: The Mecenary: Revenge of the Hunter
« Reply #2 on: October 31, 2010, 10:24:55 AM »
Oh wow I kinda forgot to improve the story since I was working on the mercenary items.

Dante is searching for his best friend, a half breed. Between a dragon and something else. I kind of neglected this to be honest I do want to work on it, but I've been working on the bigger project to be honest.

[Edit]
To be honest I'm going to put this on halt for november, since it was originally a story I had long ago. I want to try to make a novel out of it for National Writer's Month competition thing. When I come back it'll be much better to work on.

Oh and I'm not great when it comes to ABS, but that's why I'm attempting it.
« Last Edit: October 31, 2010, 10:48:18 AM by Ruzu-Danim »

Avarlie

  • Tier 6
  • *
  • Posts: 441
  • Current Mood: blank blank
Re: The Mecenary: Revenge of the Hunter
« Reply #3 on: November 03, 2010, 02:25:27 AM »
So Dante's friend is a half dragon who got taken away by a dragon.
Good luck with the competition! I think the concept has potential.