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What should the storyline of QH be of? (See main post)

Quintessence Remix
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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #15 on: March 26, 2011, 02:03:15 PM »
I though that Petal could be Headmaster and Alden could be biology teacher/ deputy headmaster
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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #16 on: March 26, 2011, 02:11:31 PM »
Hm...well, my current plan was:

Serai (Drama student)
Lunair (PE student)
Salory (English student)
Eshe (substitute chemistry teacher)
Reivier (Geography student) (note minigame + test minigame)
Vikon (Math student) (He questions everything the teacher says)
Kardian<---Office Assistant (he's pretending to be an intern)
All together for lunch.

Appearances: Mimi the cat
Ailah will help Eshe as a TA
Agatha will appear as principal, she's trying to get the cure too.

But I need a second opinion.

And what did you think of the sprites?

Edit: Frankenspriting is strangely addicting...here are some more Reivier possibilities.



Oh look, a Kardian possibility:
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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #17 on: March 26, 2011, 03:12:24 PM »
The Reivier one looks better than the Eshe one. The style of Eshe's body seems a lot different than her head, so they kind of stand out for each other, but I'm not getting that from the Reivier sprite.

EDIT: Whoops, I thought the first page was the only page :P I don't like these latter Reivier sprites, the first one is a lot better. The Kardian one is okay, but his tie looks kind of weird. And Vikon totally needs to be a slacker who never does his homework and always tries to get his teacher off-task :P
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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #18 on: March 26, 2011, 03:24:50 PM »
Hm...I'm not quite sure what you mean by that. I could try and use something else, but I think anything modern would look weird on her. Especially with that red part of her face.

I liked the first one best as well, but I can keep looking if you think there'd be something else better.

I have some other suits, I'll try them out on Kardian.

Well...my current idea is kind of based off a scene in Charlotte's Web, where the dialogue went something like this (I read the book over five years ago, so I don't remember exactly.):
Teacher: Jack runs 10 miles in 10 minutes. How long would he run in an hour?
Student: Well, we don't know. Wouldn't he get tired and start slowing down near the end?
Student2: Yeah! And what if there are strawberries on the road, and he stops to pick them?
Etc, etc, a whole story forms over why Jack is running and how long it takes. I thought that would fit Vikon, since he has experience storytelling.

...Although...I could totally see Vikon coming in and giving his teacher this LONG, DETAILED, explanation of why the dog ate his homework...maybe we could combine these two ideas? :P


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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #19 on: March 26, 2011, 05:03:10 PM »
I love Eshe and the first Reivier is perfect, the others are not as cool... Kardian's suit is too much like his hair to look good. D: I'll be editting the Lunair soon if Rayen isn't up to making her own version.

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #20 on: March 26, 2011, 05:20:05 PM »
Two yes votes for Eshe, one no vote. I'm not sure who to listen to... D:

I'll post a Kardian sprite with another suit soon.

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #21 on: March 26, 2011, 05:51:51 PM »
It looks good, it's just the spriting style of the body looks different than the spriting style of the head. Am I the only one who sees it? Maybe I'm just crazy...

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #22 on: March 26, 2011, 06:08:14 PM »
Eh. It's a little fat for her, but I doubt I'd be able to find a full-length outfit that wouldn't look fat on her, since her original outfit was rather revealing. And I doubt any school would allow a teacher to wear something that revealing. Is that what you meant?

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #23 on: March 26, 2011, 07:27:04 PM »
-sigh- No. It's okay, though... on a second look, it wasn't as bad as I thought it was.

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #24 on: March 26, 2011, 07:48:27 PM »
Then I really don't know. D:
Anyways, new version of Kardian. Keep? Continue searching? Improve?

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #25 on: March 26, 2011, 08:02:09 PM »
Then I really don't know. D:
Anyways, new version of Kardian. Keep? Continue searching? Improve?



I think it doesn't match his personality. look for something more down to earth. Dark Green or Dark Brown would work.

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #26 on: March 26, 2011, 08:09:03 PM »
*crosses fingers*

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #27 on: March 26, 2011, 08:29:37 PM »
*crosses fingers*



I like it~! His tie should be a different color. Maybe green.

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #28 on: March 26, 2011, 08:33:51 PM »
Phew! Alright, I'll do that.

Could I get some comments on the cast list from anybody? Should I add or remove anyone? Or change the courses? Else, it's staying this way, because I'm starting on an outline.

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Re: [Idea] Quintessence High
« Reply #29 on: March 26, 2011, 08:40:34 PM »
Phew! Alright, I'll do that.

Could I get some comments on the cast list from anybody? Should I add or remove anyone? Or change the courses? Else, it's staying this way, because I'm starting on an outline.

Lunair should be an Emo. XD
Reivier should be a Shy Nerd.
Vikon should be the Class Clown.
Salory and Serai should be the Preppy Girls. ;)
Kaiden, Petal and Eshe should all be Teachers.
Rayne/Agatha and General Dirk should be the Principal and Vice Principal.

Just my two-cents.