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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #30 on: August 12, 2011, 11:24:22 PM »
Ooh I'm really like-ing the style change. Both styles are cool but this style suits the awkward & slightly creepy atmosphere. The shading for the clothes is better in your previous pics though. I could also tell what sex they are without the symbols. Are they twins?

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #31 on: August 13, 2011, 02:25:56 AM »
They're Gemini! :D Lol, or maybe their the same character, just in different gender. the shading does kinda look like it was slapped together, but overall the feel of the pic itself reminds me of a mystery theater, like the Kindaichi series or Case Closed. :3 You're actually becoming a lot more detailed on your clothes and other such. Just polish the shading and you'll make your pictures pop right out! ^_^
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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #32 on: August 13, 2011, 03:39:40 AM »
Yep, I was in a genderbending mood. XD The male one is the original. Female one is a genderswap.

There's a style change? I can't really tell, actually. And yeah, I pretty much suck at shading ^^;

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #33 on: October 24, 2011, 05:34:21 AM »
A sketch:


A half-done drawing with really bad proportions:

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #34 on: October 24, 2011, 07:58:41 AM »
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Your first sketch is lovely~ Then again, I have a bit of a bias for penciled sketches >XD

The second one's head is a bit small BTW, but that's the only thing that's wrong with your proportions. The rest is pretty nice, especially the hair, and I like the demure expression on her face, it looks so natural~

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #35 on: October 24, 2011, 09:16:37 AM »
Really? I thought the head was too big. ^^;

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #36 on: October 24, 2011, 10:48:47 AM »
Head is fine. I'd recommend you to practice more on shoulder area. Good practice on figures is (if you're low on models) sketches from portrait-photos
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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #37 on: October 24, 2011, 11:38:33 AM »
*shrugs*

Seems like we all have different opinions >XDDDDD

Try what Lance said, and maybe make the neck a bit thinner. But seriously, at least try redrawing the head and/or face; the cheeks and jawline are kinda... iffy. Maybe make the lower part of the face a bit longer?

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #38 on: October 24, 2011, 02:36:57 PM »
Head is fine. I'd recommend you to practice more on shoulder area. Good practice on figures is (if you're low on models) sketches from portrait-photos

Yup. As I see it, you just gotta work on making the shoulders a little broader and the arms bigger. :)

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #39 on: October 24, 2011, 06:12:03 PM »
Head is fine. I'd recommend you to practice more on shoulder area. Good practice on figures is (if you're low on models) sketches from portrait-photos

Yup. As I see it, you just gotta work on making the shoulders a little broader and the arms bigger. :)

Wow, both of these guys already said what I thought. I think you have the right proportions for it in the pencil sketch, though. Good stuff. :)

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #40 on: October 25, 2011, 05:58:04 AM »
Thanks. I did something new yesterday:



It's a remake of that old drawing which some of you may remember. :)
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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #41 on: October 25, 2011, 06:33:52 AM »
It's nice looking~

But like with the other, I feel like the neck's too thick. Everything's looking pretty sweet tho =3

And if you need a guide of sorts for certain body parts, I'm more than glad to provide =D
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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #42 on: October 25, 2011, 07:34:43 AM »
Sorry about that. I kind of forgot to draw a line for the back of the neck there, haha. It's fixed now.

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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #43 on: October 25, 2011, 09:44:22 AM »
From proportional point of wiev I think it's okay, but I think she will fall on her back in a while. (Also is that intentional that her eyes are different?)
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Re: Kirroha's Art Thread
« Reply #44 on: October 28, 2011, 06:26:30 AM »
In truth, Kirroh's shading has gotten better. The way she proportions the ripples and wrinkles of are good as well. A bit of practice on detailing the clothes will work too, but she'll get that down with time. The hair she does her hair now it fantastic. Detailed, and if she polishies it, it'd look really great. What she does need to work on though is her body. I know with a tablet it's a little hard to smooth it out at first, but Kirroh will definitely get it. :) Keep at it, girl!
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