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Avaleaux's Game "The Solance" intro
« on: September 30, 2010, 09:26:13 PM »
Please comment, I am looking for some opinions and feedback on this  :)



THE SOLANCE INTRODUCTION-by Avaleaux-: In the secluded village of Ishidash, cut of from the world by oceans, mountains, and rivers. A woman residing there, makes an early morning walk along the beach. Then, off of the shoreline, she finds a basket, two in fact. She opens them up to find a smal child in each one, a boy, and a girl. The childeren look back and do not cry nor fret, instead they smile back, two little grins that warmed the womans heart.

She returns to the village with the two childeren, and tells her husband about what she had found. At first he cannot believe what he hears, but then sees the truth in her eyes. He then looks down at the childeren looking straight through the deep eyes that stare him back. He looks up at his wife, and smiles, they both nod. They decide to raise the childeren as their own, the woman now a mother, and the man now a father, for they had no other childeren, adopt them. The childeren reach the age of seventeen, now living on their own, for three years ago a massive storm passed through their village. Their parents dissapeared, and never returned....

The girl is now a light spirited, elegant girl named Kytria, and has an affinity for nature. The boy is now an equally light spirited, handsome young man named Sethial, holding a obscure knowledge of the unseen...They meet everyday, talking, playing, and helping the other villagers. But as of thier seventeenth birthday, things began to change.... They both start to experience strange dreams, so vivid, they almost seemed real. The dreams were both unbearable and divine, containing things that were both magnificently beautifull and obscurely horrendous. They sweat and struggle in their beds as they sleep, but do not scream. The dreams continue on for one month, when something unbelievable happens. Exactly 30 days from their birthday, in the dream they have, they both find themselves in the same dream, standing in the southern part of their village. They feel something pulling on them, not physically, but as if puling on their very souls. This force draws them to the center of their village, where a lake should be.

(WARNING- THIS NEXT SECTION CONTAINS A SMALL SPOILER, DO NOT CONTINUE READING IF YOU WANT TO RISK THAT)

There is no lake in the center of their village, instead a tower now stands their, so tall it seems to pierce the sky. They enter, scared but determined to find out what this is all about. The towers size and mass in inpropotionate, the tower is much larger on the inside than on the outside. They ascend the tower, passing through their past dreams and experiences as they climb.

They reach the top, a room with no windows or doors, but filled with a strange twilight. At the center of the room is a pool of glowing water. They approach, and peer into it, but see nothing. They look up, and see a transparent green man standing at the other end of the room. Kytria and Sethial do not flinch, but stare intently at the man. He aproaches and stays silent, as do Kytria and Sethial. The man then tells them that they are here for a reason, that they are going to stop an event called the "Solance". The Solance is the day when the Nether, a primordial fusion of both heaven and hell, will break free of its barrier, and restart everything, Obliterating everything both living and dead. Kytria and Sethial ask how they can stop such a cataclysm, how can they do anything at all! He then tells them that the elements forsaw the power of the Solance's destruction. They reacted by working together, instead of alone, to create four beings to combat the promotion of the Solances impending annihilation. Them, and two others. He explains that they unknowingly have powers that use two of the four elements powers.

Kytria uses a power created by the unison of Earth and Winds energy, and Sethial uses a power created by the unison of Fire and Waters energy. They are mind  blown by this sudden revealing of their destinies and powers, although they did remember past occuranced that do promote the truth of these abilities. The spirit tells them that two other beings like them exist, and that they must be found in order to stop the Solance. He tells them that there is a group of people called "Aesirs" trying to activate the Solance, and that they must be stopped in order to prevent the Solance. The Aesirs activities resulted in the creation of "Xublymers", people and animals morphed into creatures that will mindlessly try to destroy them. The Spirit bids them farewell, they then suddenly wake up, laying in their beds, trying to acknowledge what happened......
« Last Edit: October 16, 2010, 09:15:49 PM by Avaleaux »
What happened to you Sintel.......?

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Re: Avaleaux's Game "The Solance" intro
« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 01:51:25 AM »
I'm not sure this is in the right board - someone may want to move this.
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Re: Avaleaux's Game "The Solance" intro
« Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 05:10:36 PM »
wait a minute... yeah, sorry about that. this is my fault, i was not thinking clearly and told him to put it here :seraisweat:

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Re: Avaleaux's Game "The Solance" intro
« Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 05:30:53 PM »
That's OK, just remember that this board is for discussing RM Mechanics and whatnot
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Re: Avaleaux's Game "The Solance" intro
« Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 05:40:04 PM »
Moved.

P.S.: Paragraph breaks, plix. It's such a turn off to see great big walls of text.
« Last Edit: October 01, 2010, 05:42:17 PM by Rayen »

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