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Re: My doodles
« Reply #30 on: March 10, 2010, 11:17:04 AM »
looks better now, but yeah, you should raise the right shoulder and maybe do smth 'bout those boobs .. the right one is a lot bigger than the left one :seraisweatdrop:

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #31 on: March 10, 2010, 12:06:33 PM »
I quit on this picture, so it doesn't matter anymore...

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #32 on: March 12, 2010, 07:39:33 AM »
why did you quit on it? :(

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #33 on: March 12, 2010, 10:48:17 AM »
I didn't like the way she was standing or the way I colored it....

I always quit before finishing anything... So it's okay... ^_^;

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #34 on: March 13, 2010, 10:47:42 AM »
oh, 'kay than :D

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #35 on: March 15, 2010, 10:28:32 AM »
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Me practicing style again.

(I really like the eyes, but that's about it. I doubt I could duplicate them again)

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Me showing my boyfriend I can't do sideviews. XD

(I probably gave her a long neck, but oh wells... O.o)

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #36 on: March 15, 2010, 05:52:33 PM »
Aww. That first one. :-*
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Re: My doodles
« Reply #37 on: March 17, 2010, 12:39:30 PM »
I'm glad you like the first one. XD

I learned that I must fix the mouth on it though. ^_^

The next two involve me taking advice of drawing from real-life photos before I develop any styles. I did change things like hair or jewelry, since I do not feel comfortable drawing I person I don't know and claiming it as my artwork. :( The first chick is kind of random, but is a character for my future modern story. The second chick is actually from my game - which we have begun work on again. YAY!

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #38 on: March 17, 2010, 01:15:58 PM »
umm at the coloured version will the eyes covered by the hair still be visible? 'cause it would sorta be weird ..

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #39 on: March 17, 2010, 01:46:11 PM »
Ooh. Nice sketches. I really like that first one. :) In the second, I suggest moving her mouth a ~little~ bit towards the center. Right now it looks too far off towards the side of her face.

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #40 on: March 17, 2010, 01:53:39 PM »
While my boyfriend enjoys showing the eyes over the hair, I really don't - it's not realistic. If I could color this, the hair would go over the eye like it normally should. But I'm not really going to color them - I'm not good at doing that. :( I would love to, though - it'd make an cool avatar. ^_^

I can fix the mouth on the paper, thanks for the tip. I'm not too fond of the second one though - so I'm in no hurry.

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #41 on: March 19, 2010, 08:25:59 AM »
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While my boyfriend enjoys showing the eyes over the hair, I really don't - it's not realistic. If I could color this, the hair would go over the eye like it normally should.


I agree with you on this one :seraismile:

about colouring .. if you coloured the blue-haired girl you posted in the topic .. "Suggestions" if I remember right then you're not bad at it :)

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #42 on: March 19, 2010, 02:41:23 PM »
Yeah - that was me. XD

I almost forgot for a second.

I wonder... if I should color the first one... O.oa
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Re: My doodles
« Reply #43 on: March 21, 2010, 10:07:18 AM »
give it a try :)

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #44 on: March 21, 2010, 11:56:35 AM »
Okies. XD

Perhaps this week when Star is at work.  :)