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Re: My doodles
« Reply #105 on: August 25, 2010, 04:33:55 PM »
I figured the elbow looked off. I'll probably just crop the pictures. XD

I knew what you REALLY meant. ^.^ Har har har.

Thanks for saying I've improved, though. I'll get better someday! :D

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #106 on: August 25, 2010, 06:02:11 PM »
I agree with Reives, you have improved. :seraismile: Everything looks great, except I noticed that the laces of her .. uh.. corset-thing are aliigned under her right breast instead of in-between. This is Corinne, right? When are we gonna see some more on this game? o:

P.S. Whoa, she's got an ENORMOUS pair of . . . . . . ears.
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Re: My doodles
« Reply #107 on: August 25, 2010, 07:44:05 PM »
Thanks!

The corset is actually supposed to be like that, actually.

http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20100410225021/celestialsphere/images/6/66/Corinne.png

It has more laces under the the other breast. I wish I could show you what I mean. XD

Yeah, it's Corinne! Good memory!

You're be seeing the game when my bf decides to work on it again. I'm already ready for it, so I've been doing my own side game to learn more about RPG Maker XP so I can help with this game. XD If that makes any sense.

Should I make a game thread of it here?

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #108 on: August 26, 2010, 07:48:47 AM »
Your art definitely has improved. :) The perspective is quite good, however, if she's got her chest out like that, he arm should be a little more lax, and fixed slightly more back. Her waist is a bit small which must be because of the corestte but it's got the right arch.

You did very well on her face. Her eyes are beautiful and she's got a nice pair of lips and her face has a sweet curve. Above all, you're coming along greatly with your drawing, keep it up!   ;)

And can I ask...are you right handed?
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Re: My doodles
« Reply #109 on: August 26, 2010, 01:59:49 PM »
I'm glad I did well on the face! That was my favorite part of the of whole drawing, actually. ^.^

Yeah, I'm right handed. It's kind of annoying because I always end up smearing my art with my right hand when I move to the left side. XD

It sucks. Hehe. :3

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #110 on: August 26, 2010, 02:13:27 PM »
Eh... Start on the left? xD -shot for being useless-
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Re: My doodles
« Reply #111 on: September 06, 2010, 09:10:04 PM »
@Doragon.

You're not being useless. ^.^ That is a habit I should practice, after all. :3

Hiya, everyone! I have another doodle to show.

This time it's Comet in my game, Teara Curoto.

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Re: My doodles
« Reply #112 on: September 09, 2010, 04:31:00 PM »
The alingment of the body is better. :) The head's angle is a little off and if you fix that left arm to fit the entire body profile, your picture would be perfect. The pose is nice altogether and you drew her breasts very well. The shading also gave volume to the picture so I give you big point for that.
You should also work a little more of the hair and wings. Just go crazy with them and remember the gravity of the hair. Also, you should remember that dress need to be free. xD

Make 'em go "POOF"! :D All in all, she's very pretty.
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Re: My doodles
« Reply #113 on: October 29, 2010, 05:17:46 PM »
Thank you for the tips. I really suck at hair, bodies, and hands. Hehe.

Here's another drawing from me. O_oa I know - I fail at bodies. :)

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