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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #15 on: November 23, 2009, 08:20:05 PM »
Thanks everyone. c:

@Brick:
Mm, I think the first day of release is the time that generates the most publicity. According to Freebird's website stats, Saturday is the most active day of the week, so I was judging by that. TVTropes may have a different pattern, though.

@Vasha:
Ah yeah, I overlooked that one. May just have been me slacking off since there wasn't an eyes-closed sprite for that pose at the time though, heheh.

@Squall:
Heheh, I knew that you out all people were likely to like it. :P As for Lunair's development, I just hope it's gradual enough.

And ah, that's a good point. I think Reivier will end up still saying that, and Lunair will just make a remark about what you just said in reply.

@Sayuri:
That would be nice. :reivsmile:

@Shino:
Ooh really? That's pretty cool, how did he do that?

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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #16 on: November 23, 2009, 09:44:39 PM »
Uhh, there was a program he got from giveawayoftheday... I think. I guess I can ask him :P
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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #17 on: November 24, 2009, 12:36:02 AM »
I don't have a whole bunch of site statistics in front of me, so I can't say which days are most popular.  Since it's not like we're all Americans anyways, I'll just not try to second-guess anyone on their holiday/long weekend behaviors and I'll go with what you said.

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« Reply #18 on: November 24, 2009, 12:51:00 AM »
@Shin:
Sure, thanks. Sounds like a handy program.

@Brick:
Alright, great! By the way, are the current TVTropes Quintessence references done by you?

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« Reply #19 on: November 24, 2009, 02:07:21 AM »
@Reives: Hey, don't shift all the credit to him! I did most of the work! :P

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« Reply #20 on: November 24, 2009, 02:24:06 AM »
Ooh it was you, Kirro? Nice. c: It was great seeing them.

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« Reply #21 on: November 24, 2009, 10:01:06 AM »
@Squall:
Heheh, I knew that you out all people were likely to like it. :P As for Lunair's development, I just hope it's gradual enough.

And ah, that's a good point. I think Reivier will end up still saying that, and Lunair will just make a remark about what you just said in reply.

Yep, that's just what I would have suggested. I don't want you to change the scene (because it is so moving, and every part of the dialogue is important), just add a short remark from Lunair, that'll do it.

And yep, Lunair's development is very comprehensible and not too fast if you meant that. In fact, I think, it was time for Lunair to think about what she really wants. She had no future up to this point. And now she has and I like to see this because I like Lunair despite her actions. I like her because I understand her behaviour. And feeling happy for a fictional character shows that the story is alive, and that is exactly what stories are intended to be.

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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #22 on: November 24, 2009, 12:36:43 PM »
Wait, it's already got references?  I was planning to make a page for it.  I hadn't done it yet.

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« Reply #23 on: November 24, 2009, 05:15:30 PM »
Does Q-tbv have a page? I've seen references in it for 'Mood Whiplash' and 'I've Got Your Wife,' but does it have its own page?

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« Reply #24 on: November 24, 2009, 05:26:38 PM »
xD
I went to google it and guess who was under "White Haired Pretty Boy"
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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #25 on: November 24, 2009, 05:43:28 PM »
haha, nice. i wouldn't call him a pretty boy though... he doesn't seem to match their description (antihero, trickster...) though

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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #26 on: November 24, 2009, 10:26:43 PM »
Ah, thanks for the affirmations Squall.

And aye, Quintessence has several references up but no page at the moment. As for Reivier's trope thing, no comment. :P

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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #27 on: November 25, 2009, 12:17:35 AM »
Quick question: Would you rather I make the page with or without the subtitle?  I think the standard policy is to avoid subtitles since sequels will have different ones but share pages with their predecessors, and since they can be unwieldy (to be perfectly honest, yours is pretty unwieldy with the subtitle).  But I just wanna be sure you don't have some big objection to me butchering your title or whatever.  Or more honestly, I want to make sure you're not surprised when I go ahead and do that anyways.  Maybe I shouldn't have phrased it as a question so much as a statement.

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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #28 on: November 25, 2009, 12:26:53 AM »
Mm, since the sub-title is going to be changed when all the chapters are completed, without the sub-title would probably be best. My concern for that though is that "Quintessence" alone is a rather generic name, and if someone googles it, it may not be a clear path to get to the right source (i.e. this site). Is there a way of specifying that? Perhaps have the Freebird Games label appear somewhere on the page's header description?

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Re: Chapter I - XI Combined Package [With new Chap. XI scene!]
« Reply #29 on: November 25, 2009, 12:58:53 AM »
yeah, i think "Quintessence" can be used for too many things to just refer to it as that.

Oh, and tell us when the page is up!