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Thedreamthatcouldbe

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To see the sea (fanfic/inspired by to the moon)
« on: December 25, 2016, 08:27:20 AM »
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This is an orriginal story i wrote inspired by to the moon. I borrow no characters from the game, only the concept of sigmund corp. as a company. Two employees of sigmund corp, Ria and Mark, come to Dominville, Mo to grant the dying wish of Ernest Caloman. Little to nothing is known about the dying man so they must traverse his memories to find out why he wants to see the sea. This is the first story I have ever written and I am definitely not a writer. I'm an engineer actually. So any and all feedback is welcome and encouraged. No idea if this story will strike a chord with anyone but heres to at least giving it a shot! Its only 1/3 of the way done right now. Will finish hopefully by the end of january.

 Enjoy!


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12289499/1/To-see-the-sea

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Re: To see the sea (fanfic/inspired by to the moon)
« Reply #1 on: December 25, 2016, 03:33:51 PM »
Looks interesting so far, Dream! It's rather dark; I'm intrigued as to how you'll pull this off. If you need anything specific to be commented on, just say it  :seraismile:

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Re: To see the sea (fanfic/inspired by to the moon)
« Reply #2 on: December 25, 2016, 05:05:41 PM »
*Sees the name Ria*

*Name of persona is Ria*















































































































... Ok.