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Roxaszu

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The White Wishes
« on: December 26, 2015, 01:31:09 AM »
Hi Everyone.
How's your holiday ?

This year,
I'm not entering SS so I can make this for you all.
It's a 30 minutes game (If you do speedrun) and it's all story.

So,
I won't spoil too much about it and I'll let you all experience it yourself :)

Please tell me what you think about it in this post and give feedback about it,
It'll mean a lot for me.

Here you go :


Important Note :
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Hold Shift to run,
You'll gonna need it in some part of the game


Other Note :
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It is not tested yet, So If you find any bug, feel free to post it here or via PM :)


Hope you like it :)
Cheers & Happy Holiday, :)
- Roxaszu -

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I also make the page on Facebook for my upcoming game and update later on :
https://www.facebook.com/FractionLight

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Control :
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Directional Pad - Move
Z - Action Button
Shift - Run
Alt+Enter - Full screen / window sceen

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Screenshoot
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Main Menu :
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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2015, 10:26:34 AM »
Oooh. That is such an awesome idea, making a game for everyone :')
I'm not sure when I'll try it out (here on my vacation, I mostly just surf the web when waiting for the others to wake up or such), so may take until January ... But I'm curious already what everyone else will say!

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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #2 on: December 26, 2015, 12:20:43 PM »
Hi Sun,
Yeah,
I think everyone deserve a gift this Christmas, Since It's time for togetherness. :)

Me too !
I'm really curious about what others think about it.
Can't wait for their comment :)

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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #3 on: December 26, 2015, 03:42:31 PM »
Just played it. It was fun :)

However, that cliff climbing minigame was super hardcore. Like, I tried it about 8 times and still couldn't do it (so I skipped it in the end) D:

Also I feel you don't need so many '...'s that write out really slowly. You can keep them all for sure, but if all of them write out slowly then they loose their effect.

There were a few grammar things that could be corrected but there was only one part that I didn't understand properly (I think it was in the 'town' chapter)
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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #4 on: December 27, 2015, 12:01:22 PM »
Just played it. It was fun :)

However, that cliff climbing minigame was super hardcore. Like, I tried it about 8 times and still couldn't do it (so I skipped it in the end) D:

Also I feel you don't need so many '...'s that write out really slowly. You can keep them all for sure, but if all of them write out slowly then they loose their effect.

There were a few grammar things that could be corrected but there was only one part that I didn't understand properly (I think it was in the 'town' chapter)

Thanks, Atommo :)

Well,
There's the challenging part :P
But then I re-think about it, making difficulty option will be a good idea too.
so,
Here's the link for the new one : (Some bug fixed and difficulty for Mount climbing)
http://www.mediafire.com/download/hk691u5aetbpd84/The_White_Wishes.zip

I was more worried if the player didn't know how to run and stuck in the mansion :I


And I still wondering if the other member has already playing this game...  :-\
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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #5 on: December 27, 2015, 12:09:27 PM »
I was more worried if the player didn't know how to run and stuck in the mansion :I

It might be worth having a text box appear at the first exploration part of the game which says "Hold left shift = run"

I didn't think the mansion was that confusing. Sure, it took a while for me to find the right door to progress but I wouldn't say I got lost.
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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #6 on: December 27, 2015, 05:16:47 PM »
It was very nice of you to make a gift for everyone :)

I just finished it, I liked the stealth action, although it could use some improvements.
I also liked the story and I'm particularly happy that in the end
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We see that the girl decides to keep trying, and it doesn't necessarily mean that a miraculous stone has healed her.

I have played the old version before the difficulty change for the mount climbing, and yep it was too hard for me too! :)

You have done a good job in polishing the game in overall, especially given the fact that there were no beta testers, I could just find one passability issue:
https://app.box.com/s/fufxb5fwomtcnt9srwp3h7grsxuq6hww

Also, I expected that if I go to right in this map:
https://app.box.com/s/a4fciqa3bgv8g1wgutm8ro49isdwfzro

I should end up in the left of the following:
https://app.box.com/s/zij1xro0yc2sh4mg9ou7ur33hm6hp0g1
But I ended up still being at the right corner.

Also for this one, when I go up:
https://app.box.com/s/om6kdy4giudjdbtfud01b8o2casi4m76

Instead of appearing at the bottom of the next map, I'm at right side:
https://app.box.com/s/rvg3w7mxsdkz41nsp6yh67gj6k2rh2jq

Thank you for making such nice gifts! :)

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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2015, 12:08:08 PM »
Hi Eli,
Thank you.

I still found some bugs after that , But It's all fixed now.

Thank you for playing too :)

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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #8 on: December 29, 2015, 01:56:01 AM »
Oh I didn't see this thread! I'll download it and play it a little later.

Update: I just played it and I was great! I especially like the Polar Express music touch :) the minigames were a bit challenging but the story was beautiful. I'm just sitting here listening to the title music now. I can kinda guess what happened next in the book but it'd be nice to see it as an epilogue/extra after the credits but overall, great game!

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Re: The White Wishes
« Reply #9 on: December 29, 2015, 09:03:07 AM »
Hi, DM ! :)

Glad you like it :)
Yes, The music is so gooooddddd ~
This is the first time I'm editing the music so it can looping :)

Lol,
Just a little Secret :
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It's a secret, So I can't tell you...
[spoiler]What ?
[spoiler]Still Wanna know the secret ?
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You really want to know it that badly ?
[spoiler]Fine...
[spoiler]The Secret is
[spoiler]A Secret
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Ok, Here it is :
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I leave there hanging with a purpose ;)

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