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Serenity.neko

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #45 on: January 13, 2011, 04:33:59 PM »
Wow, (no offense) but IT'S ABOUT TIME. :p I still like this guy, and that "May I have this dance" line made me think of the signature of someone on this website (Lance, I think it was...?) as well as a poem I wrote. Hmm, brings back happy memories...~

You're pretty good at writing, Vash; I think it'd be cool if you ever got an entire storyline and wrote a book (cuz I remember once you said you'd write a book if you got a storyline).
"I like old houses. They make me feel sad."
"How is that a good thing?"
"Sad is happy for deep people."

-Doctor Who

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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #46 on: January 30, 2011, 09:00:00 PM »
CAUTION: longer than the other stuff.

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So, yeah, if you're completely lost, that's okay xD The main narrator is Machiel. He's a shinigami~ The italics are Jordan/Abidan (the name Kanzah gave him). He's a shinigami, too, but he's pathetic at it and doesn't do his job and ran away and that's why Kanzah was looking for him and yeeeeeeeaaaaaaaah....

Anyways, this was fun~

Also, the original version had italics built-in to some of the dialogue, and I don't want to take the time to find them, so you're only getting part of it :P Ta ta!
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Merlandese

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #47 on: January 30, 2011, 09:33:31 PM »

XD That was good! It seems like an excerpt from a longer story, which makes me wish there were a couple more chapters. Thanks for sharing.



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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #48 on: January 30, 2011, 09:46:48 PM »
Haha, thanks, Merlan! They (minus Jordan) have another beginning of a story, but it was very experimental, and hasn't gotten very far. Maybe after the one I'm working on now I'll pick it back up, but I've got a bad track record for that :P
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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #49 on: February 13, 2011, 08:06:07 PM »
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I'm too lazy to put the italics in where they should be :P If you really want them, check my facebook ;D
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Serenity.neko

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #50 on: February 15, 2011, 02:07:54 PM »
LAZY LAZY. Good stories, in any case. I like the last one a lot, but reading about Machi was cool. He seemed to go through a lot of trouble for Abidan for "not giving a damn about him". :p Oh, well.
"I like old houses. They make me feel sad."
"How is that a good thing?"
"Sad is happy for deep people."

-Doctor Who

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"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." -Oscar Wilde

واشا

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #51 on: February 24, 2011, 03:01:48 PM »
Did he? :salbrow: It wasn't as much as 'I don't give a damn about you' as 'I don't give a damn about what I'm supposed to be doing to you.' He knows Abidan is harmless, so he's not going to go through the trouble to drag him kicking and screaming back to Kanzah, since he and Kanzah aren't exactly on good terms.

So right now I'm working on a story that probably won't be too long. I just want to see some input from the people who read my stories here: Would you rather me post it all at once when it's nice and polished, or in updates like I do on facebook (and then post it up once again, conglomerated and all shiny and stuff)?
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Avarlie

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #52 on: February 26, 2011, 07:37:33 AM »
I vote for updates. Each update is something to look forward to and I can't read lengthy stories off the computer screen for some reason.

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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #53 on: February 26, 2011, 07:06:07 PM »
Mm, I've heard of people having that problem. Anyone else wanna vote, or should I just take wolves' vote? (And I suppose that if they don't wanna see updates, they can just not look at them! :P)
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Merlandese

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #54 on: February 26, 2011, 07:18:05 PM »
I don't have an opinion on the products length, but I would prefer only reading material that is past the rough draft stage. I like to read things that have been corrected as much as possible, cared for by the author more than once, and with as few mistakes as can be managed, so I don't get jolted out of the story by a small typo or oversight.



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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #55 on: February 26, 2011, 09:55:15 PM »
Hmm, yeah, either way, I'm going to try to be editing them before I put them up (usually with my updates I actually don't, but the updates for this story are going to few and longer than usual, so I'm hoping I'll actually keep up with it).

So it sounds like the people have spoken unanimously so far! I may or may not post up the short prologue I wrote a few days ago. Right now the update is 9 pages, written, and it's almost done I think. Yupyup!

EDIT: Did I say I might post up the prologue? I meant I will :P

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So, yeah. For any of you who have been following my stuff for awhile, this is another thing with some of the characters from the Vampyra universe, cuz ever since I wrote that I've been wanting to give Kai a sequel, but haven't thought of a plot. Well, now I have. And with all of the stuff I've written in this universe, it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside~
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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #56 on: February 28, 2011, 07:56:12 PM »
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yes, Jane likes to talk :P
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Serenity.neko

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #57 on: March 04, 2011, 11:46:28 PM »
A little fast-paced.
"I like old houses. They make me feel sad."
"How is that a good thing?"
"Sad is happy for deep people."

-Doctor Who

-----

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." -Oscar Wilde

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Re: Story Collection
« Reply #58 on: March 05, 2011, 09:42:59 AM »
Is there anything wrong with that? It was a fast paced day! :P
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Serenity.neko

Re: Story Collection
« Reply #59 on: March 05, 2011, 04:14:45 PM »
I never said there was.
"I like old houses. They make me feel sad."
"How is that a good thing?"
"Sad is happy for deep people."

-Doctor Who

-----

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." -Oscar Wilde

 


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