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Story Collection
« on: October 11, 2010, 03:02:52 PM »
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So, yeah, just some experimental writing I did with Stream-of-consciousness writings today. the second one probably will not make sense to anyone unless they know one of my chraracters who currently has no plot yet, but yeah. thoughts?

is it sad that i was actually feeling like the first one today while trying to take an APUSH test? (which i probably totally failed -.-)

so i was going to do something different for the second one, but decided to do this instead cuz my first idea wouldn't work.

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So yeah, I wrote that last one while/right after my English teacher had an asthma attack during class D:

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This was kind of requested by Sushi. I'm not sure if it's what you expected, Sushi, but it was fun to write :D

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Another attempt at the thingy. These are fun, even if i do fail at random interpretive stuff~ :D

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so this was very interesting to write... it's actually based off of some dreams. The thing with no lights working is a recurring dream that I've had semi-recently, and the climax was based off of a recurring dream I used to have. The very end was loosely based off of a dream I had once that scared me half to death O.O So... yeah.

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So yeah, I had inspiration for this awhile ago, then I never did anything with it, then I got it again after hearing about the people stuck in a mine for 60 days or something like that. dark stuff again, yay...~ -scampers off to write happy stuff-

It was going to have more to do with the title, but it just kind of...went in a different direction. It was kind of mentioned, but it wasn't really a big theme.

((Not enough space anymore. Now you'll just have to search for new ones :P))
« Last Edit: October 18, 2010, 03:49:55 PM by Vasha »
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

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Ronnie

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #1 on: October 11, 2010, 03:16:12 PM »
Wow, I wouldn't be able to write it down like that, unless I say it and record it first, then type it down.
These could be made into awesome lyrics pretty easily o:
as Songs of Undercoscience.
wow.
"They say that New York is the City That Never Sleeps. I think the people who say that have never been to Tokyo. Tokyo is the City That Never Even Blinks." (Pianissimo Butterfly) ~ click it, if you like Gravitation, you'll love this.

"Nosza, fogadd bilincseinket, kötözd be fájó szívverésed..." (József Attila)

واشا

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #2 on: October 11, 2010, 03:21:27 PM »
haha, thanks :D i was tossing around the idea of making the first one a poem, but that would have probably have gotten rid of a lot of the feeling in it
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

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Merlandese

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #3 on: October 11, 2010, 11:08:02 PM »
Oh man, you did so well. It's hard to write in that style, but I'm pretty confident that you nailed it. With a hammer. Like Captain Hammer. I'm actually reminded of the book Bright Shiny Morning by James Frey, if you've ever heard of it. :seraismile:



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Doragon

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 07:37:02 AM »
O: Chibi has a word vomit! A very BAM IN YO FACE word vomit. <o<;;

... seriously, that first one made my head start hurting. Can't tell you whether or not that's a good thing, tho...
Do you know what I mean when I say "I don't want to be alone?"
I no longer have a choice but to pretend I am brave, for a soldier has to be brave...

Sushi

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 09:10:07 AM »
... as I sat here reading this my smile just sort of slowly grew and grew the entire time. |D

Yeah. xD You know I love stuff like this~:D
Translation: FFFFFFFFF IT'S SO MUCH NONSENSE I LOVE IT SO MUCH

...yyyyessss. >.> I've come to realize that nonsense is an integral part of my life(as a child: The Phantom Tollbooth, Alice in Wonderland, The Wizard of Oz... Now: Satoshi Kon, Shel Silverstein, Un Lun Dun, Fall Out Boy... yeah, I'm always gonna love nonsense).

I love the style of both of these. :D Reminds me of my Shattershot and Flatline, except less designed to make sense. xD

I want to go write something like this now. >o>

-scurries off-
"Part of the appeal of the fantastic is taking ridiculous ideas very seriously and pretending they're not absurd." — China Miéville

واشا

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #6 on: October 12, 2010, 02:10:34 PM »
Dora: WORD VOMITS O: but yeah, that was based off of what it actually felt like during the day i wrote than in fifth period when my brain vomited D: not me physically, just my brain D:

Sushi: yes, i know you love those :D and you would not believe how FUN these are to write ;) -skips off to type one based off his teacher almost suffocating today-
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

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واشا

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #7 on: October 12, 2010, 02:32:18 PM »
Douple post of new thingyness! :o
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

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Merlandese

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #8 on: October 12, 2010, 02:43:25 PM »
I feel bad for liking it. Your poor, probably dead teacher...



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واشا

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #9 on: October 12, 2010, 03:00:54 PM »
she's not dead, somebody gave her an epi pen thingy and she went home early. she was going to go to the hospital, but she didn't have to apparently, so that's good
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

I'm Vasha Clarens, and I approve this message

واشا

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #10 on: October 14, 2010, 04:10:32 PM »
double post again~!

nother one posted, this time not stream-of-conscious-y, but i don't know how to change the name of the board
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

I'm Vasha Clarens, and I approve this message

Merlandese

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #11 on: October 14, 2010, 04:21:59 PM »
For some reason, images of unfertilized eggs (circle) and sperm (dot) came to mind for most of it.    :eshetease:
And then I realized you were really talking about circles, which reminded me of this:
The Dot and the Line: A Romance in Lower Mathematics




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واشا

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #12 on: October 14, 2010, 04:25:34 PM »
or WAS i? :o
"I've been infected by the unicorn! RUN!"




"We're all mad here. You're here, so you must be mad!"

I'm Vasha Clarens, and I approve this message

Sushi

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #13 on: October 14, 2010, 04:48:34 PM »
Was not what I was expecting. >o> But is still good~:D

NOW WRITE SOMETHING THAT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE. |D
"Part of the appeal of the fantastic is taking ridiculous ideas very seriously and pretending they're not absurd." — China Miéville

Serenity.neko

Re: Experimental Stream-of-Consciousness Writings
« Reply #14 on: October 14, 2010, 05:12:20 PM »
-now has a sudden desire to write something stream-of-consciousness!- OoO -waltzes off to Word-

Very good, BTW, Vasha~ :D
"I like old houses. They make me feel sad."
"How is that a good thing?"
"Sad is happy for deep people."

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