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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #15 on: March 08, 2017, 07:36:19 AM »
Other than the colours, I still felt like there was something off and I found what it was. The eye placement.

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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #16 on: March 08, 2017, 08:51:38 AM »
What do you think?

Imo your version looks like it's taking a turn to the left / into the background.

I don't think the original eye placement is wrong, picture for reference:
 
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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #17 on: March 08, 2017, 09:44:32 AM »
What do you think?
Imo your version looks like it's taking a turn to the left / into the background.
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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #18 on: March 08, 2017, 06:13:10 PM »
Ooohhh, looks interesting!! I do like the colors on it.

Glad to know that progress is being made.  :seraismile:
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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #19 on: March 10, 2017, 06:22:18 PM »
Hey. Haven't been here in a long while. I do like the new logo. However, I like the one that is less saturated. The original one feels like it attacks my screen. Only one thing bothers me about the design –  which is the part between the body and the wings. It looks too sharp. I made a modification

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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #20 on: March 11, 2017, 02:33:24 PM »
Nice new logo!

While the current typegace looks good, I think it is Times New Roman (certainly looks like it), wouldn't it be better for branding to have a less commonly used typeface?

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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #21 on: March 12, 2017, 01:04:12 AM »
While the current typeface looks good, I think it is Times New Roman (certainly looks like it), wouldn't it be better for branding to have a less commonly used typeface?

It is not TNR. The letters are more rounded, especially the lowercase 'f' is different. I think the font fits quite well, too. It is rounded with sharp serif, just like the bird is round with spiky wing feathers.
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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #22 on: March 12, 2017, 01:25:09 AM »
You are right, it more looks like the Times font Apple bundles with macOS.

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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #23 on: March 12, 2017, 02:03:17 AM »
I agree nevertheless. I was focused on the bird itself, so I didn't realize it then, but the font does look rather ordinary.

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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #24 on: March 12, 2017, 02:11:47 AM »
No need for an extrafancy font imo, but I would change this:

When viewing it on a black background, you can see part of the ring surrounding the words passing through the bird because it's semi-transparent.

Probably by erasing the parts that are behind the bird.
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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #25 on: March 17, 2017, 02:40:51 PM »
Ahh thanks for the heads up and revision suggestions, guys! I've been trying to catch up to schedule with FP so been a little distracted (currently just about done all the first-round memory scenes minus the stuff from the last Act).

Gonna try suggestions (eye-placement, body-wing connecting parts, & font) and take it up with the artist soon! :gothat!:

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Re: Evolved Freebird Games Logo + To the Moon Mobile coming soon~
« Reply #26 on: March 19, 2017, 05:44:56 PM »
Those curved lines (that look like parentheses rotated 90 degrees, hehe) at the top and bottom, I suggest could be a little darker.  Lastly, the part where the left wing connects to the body? It looks like that space should be smaller, i.e. left wing closer to the body.

 


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